Research and Planning: Drafts of Advert

The Drafts

 

 The drafting process of my advert was essential because the comments helped me to produce the final product. I was able to insert the correct information and edit any images and colour. This enabled me to produce the final digipak product.

 

 

Draft 1

 

 

 

 

 

 

The good things:

•  Like the typography
• theme portrayed is relevant and clear
• use of colour is good

What to improve:

 

• Artist image and representation not clear
• key information missing
• Put 'download' ideas together
• All ancillary needs to be consistent

 

 

 

Draft 2

The good things:

• Image is abstract which causes a good artist representation.
• Good consistency in terms of the use of conventions
• Typography chosen well

What to improve:

•  Explicit content looks like it is where you download it from
• More 'Babylon' song so it is where you download it from
• Can you make artist a little bigger to enhance her image?

 

For our final product, we needed to ensure that our advert match up with our other products hat o ensure to that there is a high level of consistency of my star and her image. We also had that my advert was clear involving all important information that was needed on the advert to show promotion of my artists new album and singles.